Monday, August 15, 2011
Im writing a narrative and i wrote this so far what should my complication be>?
On a cold day in summer, Bailey Jones sat there alone on the beach. Her hands wrapped around her knees, the wind twisting her hair in all shorts of different ways. She gently moved her hand across the sand and grabbed a giant pebble lying beside her. She moved the pebble back and forth in her palms waiting for something to happen. While daydreaming into the sunlight she heard someone cry out her name. ‘’ Bailey, Bailey, BAILEY JONES!’’ she moved her head slightly to the left where the voice was coming from. She jumped up to see who was calling her name; it was her best friend Lourdes Smith. Lourdes and Bailey have been best friends since they could remember; they shared everything from clothes to chickenpox. ‘’I’ve got great news!’’ Lourdes yelled. ‘’What do you want now, Smith? Bailey asked as she yawned. ‘’I got a job for the both of us to walk the dogs neighborhood; we start tomorrow at 3’’ Lourdes replied, excitedly. Bailey’s expression changed she was longing for a job for months.‘’
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